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About Me Member General Poet They call me freak!16/Female/Ireland Recent Activity Deviant for 10 Months
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No GraspNo Grasp   
Thump, thump, thump.  The drumming in my chest speeds up.  A single glance,  A subtle smile  From you was all it took.  You are so near,  That I could reach out and touch;  But so far away,  That I know I have no grasp.  Old wounds burn and slowly,  But surely,  Start to open up again.   
A single glance,  A subtle smile  From you was all it took. No Grasp
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SpeechlessSpeechless.  
 
I wanted to write you a song,  But for that I knew no chords  That sound like you.  So I decided to write you a poem  To tell you how you make me feel,  But for that I knew no words.  So I wrote this,  With a struggle;  It doesn’t mean much,  But it’s all I could manage. Speechless
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Dragons and DemonsDragons and Demons   
Love.  I once believed it to be simple,  Like in the stories from my childhood.  A beautiful princess,  A handsome prince,  And at first glance they realise and  Declare true love.  Happily.  
Ever.  After.  But where do I fit into this fairytale?  When will my prince ride in on his great steed,  Clad in golden armor and  Save me from the castle of  Dragons and demons? Dragons and Demons
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Onyx LoveheartsOnyx Love-hearts   
I draw love-hearts  In the margins of my copy,  Just for you.  The onyx ink soaks into the page,  Seeping into its deepest fibres.  Permanent.  They are not hearts of led,  They cannot be erased;  And even if I covered them over,  Try to hide them,  They will still be there.  Unseen.  They have stained the page,  Like you stained me. Onyx Lovehearts
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Thu Sep 10, 2009, 1:34 PM
  • Mood: Love
  • Listening to: My mam making lunch
  • Reading: Re-reading: Twilight
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: Nothing
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Water
I've decided to join the craze that is Twitter! After a summer of random blogging on bloger, I decided to try a new site! I'm only getting things set up but check me out!..
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I'd also like to take this opertunity to thank everyone; all my watchers, everyone who faves, and even reads my work. It means the world to me that people out there actually take the time out to read my poetry, to isten to me!

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  • Current Residence: Ireland
  • deviantWEAR sizing preference: 8-10
  • Interests: Poetry, art, music, writting!
  • Favourite movie: Pirates of the Carribean (all 3)
  • Favourite band or musician: The Script, The Fray, Snow Patrol, Taylor Swift...
  • Favourite genre of music: Pop/Country and R&B, really i like a bit of everyting.
  • Favourite artist: Paul Gaugin
  • Favourite poet or writer: Patrick Kavanagh, Michelle Paver
  • Favourite style of art: Anime/Manga
  • Operating System: Windows Vista
  • MP3 player of choice: Philips
  • Favourite game: Bubblebobble
  • Favourite gaming platform: Wii
  • Personal Quote: I nearly died!!
  • Tools of the Trade: Pen, pencil, Laptop.

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~AsHappyAsIGet Aug 26, 2009, 2:29:09 AM
thank u for the :+fav:
:D :D :D :D :D

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'there is no way to happiness, happiness is the way'
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~I-hide-behind-a-mask Aug 27, 2009, 10:12:30 AM
No problem :D

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The sky is the limit....imagination is your wings...fly.
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~ScarboroughLass Jun 10, 2009, 8:45:57 PM
HI, I've checked out a few of your other poems and I have to say I think you're a pretty good writer. I hope you didn't think I was being too harsh on the one I commented on, it's just a shame when a really good piece is brought down by poor spelling and grammar. Your work deserves to be perfect, right?

Anyway, I hope you took it well, and I hope you don't mind me watching you!
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Mood: Joy ~I-hide-behind-a-mask Jun 14, 2009, 1:32:24 PM
No, not at all. I appreciate all the addvice, constuctive critisism and watchers I get. You comment wasn't harsh, it was the truth. I can be very sloppy when typing out my work, I promise to be more careful from now on. You're right, my work does deserve to be perfect :)

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The sky is the limit....imagination is your wings...fly.
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~AsHappyAsIGet Jun 5, 2009, 9:24:06 AM
thanks for the fav.

BTW i love ur blog :D

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'there is no way to happiness, happiness is the way'
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Mood: Joy ~I-hide-behind-a-mask Jun 6, 2009, 5:20:24 AM
Your welcome!!! Oh thanks!! which one have you read? I have 2..
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and this is my newer one: [link]
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The sky is the limit....imagination is your wings...fly.
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*E-Shark47 May 19, 2009, 5:17:19 PM
Your poetry is amazing. It seems your only problem (from what I've seen) is spelling errors. Expect me to be a regular. By the way, if you are looking to further your poetic knowledge, I have a few materials that may be of use.

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I can't be everything to everyone. To thy own self be true.
-Thea Vidale

Dare to be the Dreamer

One day: ^E-Shark47
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Mood: Joy ~I-hide-behind-a-mask May 24, 2009, 7:12:14 AM
Wow, Thanks, I never thought that anyone would consider my poetry "amazing"! Yes, spellings are and have always been one of my flaws; but believe it or not I'm getting better! ^^,
Any matrials you have I'd be interested in! Thanks so much for the fave and the watch! They mean alot:)

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The sky is the limit....imagination is your wings...fly.
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*E-Shark47 May 24, 2009, 8:49:47 AM
Sure thing:
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I'll just give you two (I don't want to overload you.)

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I can't be everything to everyone. To thy own self be true.
-Thea Vidale

Dare to be the Dreamer

One day: ^E-Shark47
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~TerribleTreasure May 1, 2009, 8:39:22 PM
let me know if you're liking my critique or not. I don't mean to offend you and demean your art in anyway. You have tremendous potential and I want to cultivate that.

let me know if there is anything in particular you want me to look at.

Tracey

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A poem is a naked person... Some people say that I am a poet.
Bob Dylan

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